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Princess Lost Soul Chapter 1 Part 1
« on: November 24, 2011, 22:43 »
     
On one cold night, Yuki, Princess of the Sun Empire was awaken from a scent of smoke. She thought that some on in the kitchen was making something. Yuki got out of bed, and went to the corridor towards the kitchen. But suddenly she was knocked out. The soldiers from all over the castle alarmed everyone, "The castle is on fire, the castle is on FIRE! Everyone evacuate from the castle!"
But little did they know, the princess was kidnapped by a knight. "Hehe, Yuki, you're too nice to everyone. You need to understand what kind of people this horrible world has." The knight stroked Yuki's beautiful brown hair and kissed her forhead. While the knight and the princess escaped from the castle, the King and Queen were shocked and terrified by the missing princess. All soldiers, maids, butlers, and everyone within the Sum Empire went searching for the Princess. But...when they finally found Yuki...,sadly, her clothes were shredded into pieces, her hair, her beautiful hair, cut off; leaving only a short strands of hair on her head. The soldiers carried her to a nearest and shelter to rest, while the castle is being rebuilt. Yuki finally woke up the next morning, "Mmmm...huh? Where am I? Why does it smell like smoke?"
Her head throbbed, but she continued to lift her body up and strolled around the shelter she was in. One of the soldiers who carried, Cero, saw the princess, and rushed to her."Yuki-sama, are you alright? Do you need water? Would you like me to get your mother and father? What happen to you?"
While these questions were asked for Yuki, she just stared at him, as if he was some lunatic. In her head she asked herself, Who in the world is Yuki? Why is he asking me if I'm alright? Of course I'm alright....Its not like I'm some type of noble and personally my name is definitely not Yuki; its....its....wait...who am I?! Oh my lord, what's my name?. Yuki started to panic and screamed, "AHHHHH ! I don't remember anything. Who am I? Where am I?! Who is the handsome soldier? What is my nature being?"
While listening to the panicking and screaming of these words, Soldier Cero was shocked. Oh no...the princess...her memories are gone! How should I report this? .....It must have been Mana!...That Mana must have erased her memories.. Mana must have been the knight who kidnapped her, but was it really him that erased her memories or was it another guy?
« Last Edit: November 27, 2011, 20:13 by NibbPower »

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Re: Princess Lost Soul Chapter 1 Part 1
« Reply #1 on: November 24, 2011, 23:25 »
Ooh, an intriguing end. O.O
But...did what I think just happened happen to Yuki? O.o
(Keep going, keep going!)


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Re: Princess Lost Soul Chapter 1 Part 1
« Reply #2 on: November 25, 2011, 11:54 »
     
LOLOL. I'm still working on part 2.
There are 3 parts to each chapter. ^0^
I suck at making stories.
So its going to be REALLY RANDOM XD

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Re: Princess Lost Soul Chapter 1 Part 1
« Reply #3 on: November 25, 2011, 14:28 »
More people should write random stories. It's a better way to get ideas out rather than meticulously planning. :)


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Re: Princess Lost Soul Chapter 1 Part 1
« Reply #4 on: November 27, 2011, 20:10 »
exactly. I love makign stories. But most peopel tings its weird, when tis random XD
But Atleast some people love random stories. ^0^

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