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Princess Lost Soul Chapter 1 Part 2
« on: November 27, 2011, 20:08 »
Back at the castle, the King and Queen were worried about their little princess. Arina, a soldier, reported to the Queen, "Your majesty, I have been told that, Princess Yuki has awakened...."
"REALLY!? Where is she? Let me see her!" The queen has spoken, but did not let Arina-san finish speaking.
"But your majesty, she doesn't -"
"Stop talking, and bring me to her! This is an order!"
With a big sigh, she replied, "Yes, your majesty. I will take you to her. But please try not to be shock. Afterall, you didn't let me finish speaking."
Soldier Arina and Queen Alice went to the shelter Cero and Yuki was in. What did Arina meant by Please try not to be shocked? I should have listen to Arina first...but I'm too worried about my beautiful daughter. With a huge sigh, the queen hoped Yuki was alright. Back to the king, who was more worried about his castle than his daughter. " Wait a minute. You! Over there! What is that thing you trying to cover?"
The King pointed at some type of marking on the castle wall, that was marked towards the Princess's room. Builder number one had no clue what it was, but, "It could have been here all the time, since many knights would come here and mark on the walls many times." "Well, I understand that, but why would they mark on MY princess's wall? When they have their own wall to mark on?"
As the king says while pointing to the direction of the wall the knights would use to throw knives. This sudden mystery was very unveiling and made the whole castle wondering what did exactly happened before the fire? Was it one of the knights that marked the wall? What was their intention? Back to where the Queen and Arina-San are at. It seems like Queen Alice was really happy to see her daughter okay, "Sweety, you're alright! Oh my goodness, I thought you lost a bone or lost a memory or some sort. It got me worried when Arina told me that I shouldn't try to be shocked." as the queen says with a smile and a tiny tear from the corner of her eye.
"Uhm...sorry but who are you?" Once these words were said, the queen fainted.
What comes to the mind from Soldier Cero and Soldier Arina? Will Yuki remember some of the memories that happen as they go along with some questions? 
« Last Edit: November 27, 2011, 20:15 by NibbPower »

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Re: Princess Lost Soul Chapter 1 Part 2
« Reply #1 on: November 27, 2011, 20:35 »
My, my. The plot thickens!
Your writing is more coherent and better-planned in this part. Nice job!


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Re: Princess Lost Soul Chapter 1 Part 2
« Reply #2 on: November 29, 2011, 19:29 »
Lol thank you. ^0^     

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