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Re: A Poem
« Reply #15 on: May 14, 2013, 02:10 »
:)
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Re: A Poem
« Reply #16 on: May 14, 2013, 07:50 »
Good job. Full of emotion and lots of vivid imagery.
Might I suggest a proofread though? (There are just some small things that need attention.)
Wit beyond measure is man's greatest treasure.

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« Reply #17 on: May 14, 2013, 16:53 »
I know Vaux I just cannot proofread my own writting b/c I cannot catch them
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« Reply #18 on: May 15, 2013, 00:57 »
I know that, I suffer from the same thing but I was implying the fact that you could ask a trusted friend to read over your work also. :]
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« Reply #19 on: May 15, 2013, 01:13 »
That is true but the sad thing about that is a true y'all more than the people I grow up with or the people in my town
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Re: A Poem
« Reply #20 on: May 15, 2013, 04:53 »
If you ever need help. We'll always be here you know  :goodjob: *h3r0

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« Reply #21 on: May 15, 2013, 07:15 »
Pau's right. We are your internet family, after all. *creepy face*
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« Reply #22 on: May 15, 2013, 15:43 »
Thanks! Rhat is true y'all are my internet family and I trust all of you guys very much!
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Re: A Poem
« Reply #23 on: May 16, 2013, 02:09 »
aawwww~ :o_o:

sister!!!! *skip

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« Reply #24 on: May 16, 2013, 02:12 »
:)  :love:
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« Reply #25 on: May 16, 2013, 13:32 »
I really do consider this group a family. All the members are so close! And we have been through a lot, but we stuck together! Thats the beauty of this group, we leave no one behind! (Or so I'd like to believe, thats why I fell in love with this group!) :love:

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« Reply #26 on: May 16, 2013, 21:08 »
You know what Lia, I havent been here for very long but I feel the same way :)
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« Reply #27 on: May 17, 2013, 03:37 »
everyone agrees  :goodjob:

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« Reply #28 on: May 17, 2013, 22:00 »
:)
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« Reply #29 on: May 18, 2013, 20:46 »
I'm glad~!  :goodjob:

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