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"The Missing Piece"- Poem
« on: July 18, 2013, 00:43 »
Here is a poem Scotty and me wrote in about 30 minutes. Tell us what u think please!

“The Missing Piece”
I was yet a child,
In a man’s world fighting to do what I needed to do
Yet there was something missing in my life that I wanted to find.
There was a hole unfilled,
A missing puzzle piece.
I need to find this to be whole,
To feel like my life is completed.

As I grew up something I noticed,
I got looks from classier people than me.
Like I was nothing,
But dirt to them,
And yet they didn’t look happy themselves.

Time passed as I looked at things,
And at people that was stuck,
Stuck at a dead end jobs.
Then I realized what was missing was my dreams,
My dreams coming true.

Dreams of have a job I love,
Having a loving family,
A wife I love to death,
Having as many children as she wants,
Living in a Southern Victorian house,
With a wraparound porch,
And a white picket fences in the background,
With our dogs,
And other animals we might want.
These are my dreams,
This is what I want,
And no one can take this from me now.
~Jess~
~The Blobstowl~
~The Blobstowl and her guardian feather~
~The Blobstowl and her wings~ <3

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Re: "The Missing Piece"- Poem
« Reply #1 on: July 18, 2013, 02:23 »
 :woohehe:

*applause*

...And there go my fishbots! Thank you Rioui Poo~! *hugs*

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Re: "The Missing Piece"- Poem
« Reply #2 on: July 18, 2013, 08:31 »
 :love:

thanks to Shineshan <3


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Re: "The Missing Piece"- Poem
« Reply #3 on: July 18, 2013, 21:15 »
 :goodjob:
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Re: "The Missing Piece"- Poem
« Reply #4 on: July 19, 2013, 22:35 »
thanks  :love:
~Jess~
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~The Blobstowl and her wings~ <3

 

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